EDITS BY PATTY
Professional Editing Without The Hefty Price Tag
ABOUT ME
Straightforward, Comprehensive and Affordable Edits
As a licensed attorney, I know the power of words. Particularly when it comes to creating a persuasive narrative to present before a stranger. As a UC Berkeley and UCLA School of Law alum, I know how difficult and exhausting the application process can be, especially when it comes to writing the application essays. However, I also know that that application essays can be a deciding factor that determines whether my clients receive a rejection or acceptance letter.
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I am committed to providing quality, comprehensive edits that goes beyond grammar and sentence structure at an affordable price because your chances of getting into your dream school should not be dependent on your current financial circumstances. I strive to provide straightforward suggestions along with my reasoning for each suggestion.
Personal statements and other application essays are an opportunity to transcripts to life. I will work with my clients to create their narrative and I will provide the insights I have gained by going through the admission process myself.
THOUGHT-BASED APPROACH
Support That Makes a Difference
LEVEL 1
$50
I will edit your personal statement once, providing detailed feedback on theme, structure, grammar, and organization. I will also provide significant commentary on the content and direction of your essay and give you tips and pointers for continued expansion of your ideas.
LEVEL 2
$85
I will edit your personal statement twice. With each editing session, I will provide feedback on theme, structure, grammar, and organization. I will also provide significant commentary on the content of your essay and give you tips and pointers for continued expansion on your ideas. After the initial edit, I will give you time to make changes before you resubmit your essay for the final editing session.
LEVEL 3
$150
I will work with you one on one to edit your personal statement up to four times. With more edits, I can guide you through developing new content and fine-tuning the overall story of your essay. With each editing session, I will provide feedback on theme, structure, grammar, and organization. I will also provide significant commentary on the content and give you tips and pointers for continued expansion on your essay. After each edit, I will give you time to make changes before you resubmit your essay for the next editing session.
MAKE IT YOUR OWN
Prices Varies
Do you need more guidance on getting started? Would you like to schedule a phone consultation as part of your package? Are you struggling with writer's block and in need of coaching? Reach out for customized plans.
